finish first spar

game/chapters/chapter1/first_test.rpy

@@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ label .dodge_left_counterattack:
         "[[Rewind]":
             # Shared mechanic: reads `checkpoint` (".first_attack_choice") and
             # rewinds there via the teal-wash effect, then returns here.
-            call .do_rewind
+            call do_rewind
         "Press the attack":
             jump .dodge_left_counterattack_press
 
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ label .dodge_left_anticipate_left:
     thinking "That knocked the air out of me! I need to catch my breath. Or should I rewind?"
     menu:
         "[[Rewind]":
-            call .do_rewind
+            call do_rewind
         "Create distance":
             jump .dodge_left_anticipate_left_distance
 
@@ -104,14 +104,85 @@ label .dodge_left_anticipate_left_distance:
     screen black with dissolve
     jump .after_spar
 
+label .dodgle_left_anticipate_jump:
+    "Sara leaps into the air, narrowly avoiding the strike."
+    "Eron uses the momentum of the missed strike to do a spinning attack"
+    menu:
+        thinking "There is a brief window where he shows his back"
+        "Attack":
+            jump .dodge_left_anticipate_jump_attack
+        "Parry":
+            jump .parry
+
+label .dodge_left_anticipate_jump_attack:
+    "Sara tries to go for the opening"
+    "But she is simply too slow, she lacks combat experience."
+    "Eron hits her temple with the spinning attack before she can hit is back"
+    screen black with dissolve
+    jump .after_spar
+
 label .dodge_left_anticipate_jump:
     "Sara jumps over the incoming strike, landing gracefully."
     jump .eron_adjusts
 
 # Initial right
 label .dodge_right:
+    "Sara dodges straight into Eron's attack, and gets hit on the shoulder."
+    thinking "Ugh! That was a heavy hit, should I rewind? No, I should gather more information first"
+    menu:
+        "[[Rewind]":
+            call do_rewind
+        "Create distance":
+            jump .dodge_right_distance
 
+label .dodge_right_distance:
+    "Sara tries too create some distance between herself and Eron, but he quickly closes the gap."
+    thinking "How is he so fast? Just focus on defending myself"
+    menu:
+        "Parry":
+            jump .parry
+        "Create distance":
+            jump .dodge_right_distance_distance
+
+label .dodge_right_distance_distance:
+    "Sara manages to create some distance, but Eron is relentless and quickly closes the gap again."
+    "Before she can further react, he strikes her temple."
+    screen black with dissolve
+    jump .after_spar
+        
+# Initial parry
 label .parry:
+    "Sara raises her weapon to block Eron's incoming strike."
+    "Sara's weapon gets knocked way to the side, leaving her wide open."
+    thinking "Ugh! How heavy was that strike? I am already loosing my grip. Should I rewind right way?"
+    menu:
+        "[[Rewind]":
+            call do_rewind
+        "Recover":
+            jump .parry_recover
+        "Create distance":
+            jump .parry_create_distance
+
+label .parry_recover:
+    "Sara tries to regain her balance, but Eron is relentless."
+    menu:
+        "Parry":
+            jump .parry_recover_parry
+        "Dodge":
+            jump .parry_recover_dodge
+
+label .parry_recover_parry:
+    "Sara attempts to parry again, but Eron strikes through her defense, hitting her temple."
+    screen black with dissolve
+    jump .after_spar
+
+label .parry_recover_dodge:
+    "Sara attempts to dodge, but Eron anticipates her movement and strikes her temple."
+    screen black with dissolve
+    jump .after_spar
         
 
 label .after_spar:
+    "Sara lies on the ground, trying to recover from the intense sparring session with Eron."
+    thinking "I need to analyze his movements more carefully next time."
+    return